I have been thinking about what I could have done better with my novella “All Our Eyes”. So what worked? The story had a 3-levels of narrative. I wrote them from the inside out and this worked well. The second level of the narrative had a lot of cross-referencing and writing that in was a lot of fun. The outer layer was meta, and that too was easy/fun. When I had to change something major, like delete chapters (I deleted at least two) and reorder chapters (e.g. act 2), it caused a ton of ...| Consumption Exhaust